November 25th, 2004

(no subject)

I'm proofreading for drown_not_wave at the moment -- for sense and English only, rather than for content, since I am about ten years behind her in biological know-how at the moment (ten, is that right? GCSE, A-level, first degree, second degree. Yeah, ten). The following comment has just been sent:
3.2.3, general comment: Congratulations! You have completed an entire paragraph in which I have not the slightest idea what you're talking about, with the possible exception of the phrase "gently mixed". And even that probably doesn't mean what I think it means.

Never mind, I'm pretty sure she wouldn't understand my thesis either. ;)